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Crafts

Sleeping beauty by mldzz Sleeping beauty :iconmldzz:mldzz 272 18 Quilled Dragon of Good Fortune by SpiralArtisan Quilled Dragon of Good Fortune :iconspiralartisan:SpiralArtisan 276 42 Needle felting - Grey Kitten by SaniAmaniCrafts Needle felting - Grey Kitten :iconsaniamanicrafts:SaniAmaniCrafts 193 42 Pressed Flowers and Leaves by Enchantedgal-Stock Pressed Flowers and Leaves :iconenchantedgal-stock:Enchantedgal-Stock 248 38 'Sion axe', handmade brass keychain by seralune 'Sion axe', handmade brass keychain :iconseralune:seralune 100 72 STAINED GLASS ELK by lenslady STAINED GLASS ELK :iconlenslady:lenslady 200 32 Flowers from a cold porcelain by polyflowers Flowers from a cold porcelain :iconpolyflowers:polyflowers 45 3 Achromia the albino kangaroo poseable art doll! by CreaturesofNat Achromia the albino kangaroo poseable art doll! :iconcreaturesofnat:CreaturesofNat 39 2 SOLD Three-tailed fox commission poseable artdoll. by CreaturesofNat SOLD Three-tailed fox commission poseable artdoll. :iconcreaturesofnat:CreaturesofNat 81 9 Skull commission by Talty Skull commission :icontalty:Talty 87 41 Ball and Chain by TheTerezkaD Ball and Chain :icontheterezkad:TheTerezkaD 6 0 Handmade Vinyl Record Art - Janis Joplin by Cb375 Handmade Vinyl Record Art - Janis Joplin :iconcb375:Cb375 56 11 Flower Fairies of the Spring from Stories Made By by LenaHandmadeJewelry Flower Fairies of the Spring from Stories Made By :iconlenahandmadejewelry:LenaHandmadeJewelry 220 27 Amish Country by Mrs-Durden Amish Country :iconmrs-durden:Mrs-Durden 462 113 Eagle in poplar by LlavedPeacemaker Eagle in poplar :iconllavedpeacemaker:LlavedPeacemaker 6 7 Copernicus the Welsh terrier by KALEideaSCOPE Copernicus the Welsh terrier :iconkaleideascope:KALEideaSCOPE 76 23

Traditional Art and Photos

Alternative Way by Pierre-Lagarde Alternative Way :iconpierre-lagarde:Pierre-Lagarde 584 168 Daredevil by JoelGomez Daredevil :iconjoelgomez:JoelGomez 602 44 The Bookseller by applePAI The Bookseller :iconapplepai:applePAI 460 76 Tell Me All Aboat It by Eremitik Tell Me All Aboat It :iconeremitik:Eremitik 6 11 victoriafalls - zambia by 8moments victoriafalls - zambia :icon8moments:8moments 315 11 Rainstorm by noir-limite Rainstorm :iconnoir-limite:noir-limite 376 39 Nature's Fire by kach-back Nature's Fire :iconkach-back:kach-back 480 261 Wirt by Kyngdok Wirt :iconkyngdok:Kyngdok 11 2 Standing Still by Kyngdok Standing Still :iconkyngdok:Kyngdok 114 15 'Come Alive' - Moraine Meadow Sunset RMNP Colorado by JeffreyDobbs 'Come Alive' - Moraine Meadow Sunset RMNP Colorado :iconjeffreydobbs:JeffreyDobbs 440 63 U-Bhf. Alexanderplatz XXIX by iDie U-Bhf. Alexanderplatz XXIX :iconidie:iDie 149 16 Glory by jonathanjessup Glory :iconjonathanjessup:jonathanjessup 297 24 violin || 2014 by kevinsaintgrey violin || 2014 :iconkevinsaintgrey:kevinsaintgrey 267 20 Drive by simsalabima Drive :iconsimsalabima:simsalabima 610 22 The other side by matthieu-parmentier The other side :iconmatthieu-parmentier:matthieu-parmentier 858 37 Here by moving--shadows Here :iconmoving--shadows:moving--shadows 312 21

Critiques


Critique "Like Math, but with No Numbers" You left no questions so I'll just give you my opinion about whatever strikes me. I don't think this story is too short or too long. It's just right. I like a story that presents word-pictures right away and doesn't spend a lot of time explaining everything....

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Critique for "Um" You didn't leave any questions, and I'm operating on opinion only, but here we go into a short critique. 1. It's short because I see the need to advertise such a Society, excellently made into a business card that can go up on the 'fridge. I like the address you left for FB, and ho...

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Circle the wagons! This writer is at it again!
And doing a poor job of it, too. I just reread A Celestial Visit and nearly strangled on its confusing, confused, and confounded prose.
I read it because I was asked to write a bit about how to write. I knew I was having trouble with that story, but didn't see it clearly 'til now... and I think the only reason I'll keep it is as an example of how not to write. (yeah, i'm disappointed, but will keep trying with it, if you say so)

And suddenly all the hawks are circling the US, with the word 'war' said. I've long wished that those who declare war had to be the ones who fought it, too. :no: Maybe I should just quit looking at the news. I get upset and everything seems exaggerated.

I spent a lot of time at devart this week, just looking at other people's profile pages and galleries. I enjoyed myself thoroughly, and recommend it to anyone fighting with their art. (me) Actually, I recommend it to anyone at all. Visit your friends and get a little going between you and them, find interesting stuff; generally amuse yourselves. I'd forgotten this site can be a fun place, pretty good for people who are fighting with their art. (i won't say that again) Good as a place of discovery, help, and friendship. Go beyond the DDs for your sense of adventure. Then turn off the computer and go outside, which I'll do now, even though it's about four in the morning. :bye: ... :heart:

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LadyLincoln Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the return :+devwatch:, dearheart. :heart: 
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Spiritofdarkness Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017
Protective bubble run   thank you very much for the +fav    Lotus Leaf
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kach-back Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2017   Traditional Artist
Thank you very much for the :+fav:'s of my Slow Melt, and Together works. I am very glad you liked them. :-)
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catloversjt Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2017   Writer
thank you for the watch, I really appreciate it <3 and I hope you have a wonderful week!
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haijinik Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2017  Student Writer
the DD appreciation is appreciated!
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Eremitik Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2017
LJ
:no: You honor me too much.
But as always, Thank You. Your constant support means a lot to me and I want you to know that you are one of my inspirations to be a better writer.
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LancelotPrice Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2017
Thanks for the fave, LJ! :)
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You're a really talented writer! Keep up the good work! :meow:
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DC-26 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2016
Goodness, thanks very much for suggesting First Impressions for a DD :)
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