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Music is her life,
her warm melody
a life line
floating on air
in a summer park.
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Music is her life - [link]
Warm Melody - [link] - I added "her"
Life Line - [link] - I added "a"
Floating on air - [link]
In A Summer Park - [link]

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:iconkawaiiaddie:
KawaiiAddie Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful!
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KawaiiAddie Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome ^^
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:iconlord-of-justice:
LORD-OF-JUSTICE Apr 17, 2013  Student Writer
Is this a haiku? If so it's beautiful
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:iconxlntwtch:
Nope, just a "title poem." :iconthankscommentsignplz:
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:iconlord-of-justice:
LORD-OF-JUSTICE Apr 18, 2013  Student Writer
well regardless it was lovely
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:iconxlntwtch:
If you hit the links below it, you'll see where I got the titles.
It's kinda fun. :)
And thank you very much.
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:iconlord-of-justice:
LORD-OF-JUSTICE Apr 18, 2013  Student Writer
Anytime
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:iconpauper-circumstance:
Is this a haiku? Sounds like a haiku. And it reads very very well! Nice work. :)
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:iconxlntwtch:
xlntwtch Apr 7, 2013   Writer
I don't know enough about different forms of haiku to answer your question.
But I'm glad you find it "nice work." :)
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